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we said our farewells by ~amor-triste:iconamor-triste:





we said our farewells
mine with a silent gaze
yours with one last rip on my heart
one last sigh from inside

a silver tear fell down my face of stone
i begged you not to change
laughingly you danced around me
you said it was all just a game

as the wind whispered your name one last time
my lips mirrored your own
goodbye, goodbye
i was crumbling beneath my pain
and all you gave me was a simple, heartless wave

Copyright © 2005 Dani Rymill, All Rights Reserved
©2005-2009 ~amor-triste
:iconamor-triste:

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about this person who was really close to me not so long ago
and who i now consider myself just about abandoned by

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:iconawetumn:
Painfully visual... I like :) I've got a couple poems like that myself :( but at least extreme emotion bears lovely poems such as this :) Poetic muse has to come from somewhere right!

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My tongue's the only muscle on my body, that works harder than my heart.
:iconhimeritsuko:
...wow...ouch i feel the pain :tears:

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~Rae
-We have free will because even though we'll always do what we always did, we didn't always know at the time we were doing it that what we were doing has always been what we were going to do anyway-
:iconspluto:
I can relate, that hurts like nothing else. You depicted it very well. <3

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Boy you swallow truth like honey.
:iconamor-triste:
lately ive been realizing extreme emotions are beautiful
*blushes* thank you



--
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
x Blake


~NiennaSwift my poetry account
~amor-triste my photography account
:iconamor-triste:
yeah, it hurt
but at least i can write about it

--
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
x Blake


~NiennaSwift my poetry account
~amor-triste my photography account
:iconamor-triste:
:hug: thank you

--
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
x Blake


~NiennaSwift my poetry account
~amor-triste my photography account
:iconhimeritsuko:
and you do it so well :)

--
~Rae
-We have free will because even though we'll always do what we always did, we didn't always know at the time we were doing it that what we were doing has always been what we were going to do anyway-

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